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Showing posts with label Leeds Festival Fringe. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Leeds Festival Fringe. Show all posts
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Leeds Festival Fringe: Client Feedback 02
"Hello Liam,
Apologies for not picking up on this sooner, the headline actually needs to read:
'Leeds Festival Fringe', 'Not Leeds Fringe Festival'.
Other than that, I would have to say that there's something just not sitting right for me...
I like the title in the top left and the use of a forward slash. I like how they tie into the concept. The email address along the bottom left also works really well; and I agree, I think we should work with a 10% tint in regards to the type.
I think you just need to play around with the copy in the middle and we won't be far away.
Regards,
D"
Apologies for not picking up on this sooner, the headline actually needs to read:
'Leeds Festival Fringe', 'Not Leeds Fringe Festival'.
Other than that, I would have to say that there's something just not sitting right for me...
I like the title in the top left and the use of a forward slash. I like how they tie into the concept. The email address along the bottom left also works really well; and I agree, I think we should work with a 10% tint in regards to the type.
I think you just need to play around with the copy in the middle and we won't be far away.
Regards,
D"
Leeds Festival Fringe: Client Feedback 01
"Hi Liam,
I get what you mean with the experimental layouts, but I don't think it works with the image; it kind of departs from the impact.
The typeface is spot on, but I think more of a slate grey would perhaps work. The white overpowers the image for me.
I also like the writing over the face but really we need the eyes/mouth/hair visible. Maybe centralised type, and space throughout the poster?
I like the positioning of the email address in the bottom corner, that works well. I also strangely think the logo looks alright, but this is upto you entirely as the client has said that it isn't majorly important to include this.
Regards,
D"
I get what you mean with the experimental layouts, but I don't think it works with the image; it kind of departs from the impact.
The typeface is spot on, but I think more of a slate grey would perhaps work. The white overpowers the image for me.
I also like the writing over the face but really we need the eyes/mouth/hair visible. Maybe centralised type, and space throughout the poster?
I like the positioning of the email address in the bottom corner, that works well. I also strangely think the logo looks alright, but this is upto you entirely as the client has said that it isn't majorly important to include this.
Regards,
D"
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