Monday, 14 February 2011

Creative Networks: Coasts Client Feedback 01

Hi Liam,

My first impression is that it looks far too similar to the November flyer you created so I would advise a new layout and approach. The oversized, underlined text was used to good dramatic effect last time, but this is a more ‘inspirational’ event.

Secondly, the overlaid text is difficult to read and, you are right, the font doesn’t really say ‘internet’ to me.

Could you take a different approach please?

Many thanks

Bridget

No comments:

Post a Comment