"Hi Liam,
I get what you mean with the experimental layouts, but I don't think it works with the image; it kind of departs from the impact.
The typeface is spot on, but I think more of a slate grey would perhaps work. The white overpowers the image for me.
I also like the writing over the face but really we need the eyes/mouth/hair visible. Maybe centralised type, and space throughout the poster?
I like the positioning of the email address in the bottom corner, that works well. I also strangely think the logo looks alright, but this is upto you entirely as the client has said that it isn't majorly important to include this.
Regards,
D"
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