"Hello Liam,
Apologies for not picking up on this sooner, the headline actually needs to read:
'Leeds Festival Fringe', 'Not Leeds Fringe Festival'.
Other than that, I would have to say that there's something just not sitting right for me...
I like the title in the top left and the use of a forward slash. I like how they tie into the concept. The email address along the bottom left also works really well; and I agree, I think we should work with a 10% tint in regards to the type.
I think you just need to play around with the copy in the middle and we won't be far away.
Regards,
D"
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